My Brother
My brother is a baby and he is smart he knows 4+4 ! .bob’s always wanting to fix things at work.my brother is really scared because when my mum and dad go sleep he turns of the light and run up stairs (well sometimes he trips and falls ) . He is as bright and enthusiastic as a pack of starburst ™ lollies. My brother is really disgusting because he eats with his hands. He is as stormy as rough sea, splashing water everywhere. My brother is good at soccer because we play it at home. My brother is a pair of extremely worn trainers. My brother is really nice when I am sick he gives me soup(but he spills it every time). Bob is really strong like Mr Riceman
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Nice work Koleka. I am your friend Josie. I like how you said your brother is good at soccer. I also like how added a photo about a puppy and strawberrys that is really cool. Well done!
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DeleteHi Koleka
ReplyDeleteIt's lovely to see you are still enjoying writing, and writing . This is a super description about your brother. I especially like your sentence " He is as stormy as rough sea, splashing water everywhere. "
You also describe him as a kind brother which I am sure he is. You are also very kind Koleka. I say this because I remember your kindness (and your beautiful smile) from last year in Te Ana Ako.
Keep safe with your family during lockdown and enjoying your online learning.
Mrs Law
Talofa Lava Koleka, I'm your neighbour Nijel and I'm a student in at Waikowhai Primary School in Te Waka Ako. I like how you took a photo of a puppy and a strawberry. Who is your brother?. Next time tell us why you like puppy on your blog. If you want to comment on my blog visit at https://wpsnijelp.blogspot.com/.Blog You Later Koleka.
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DeleteKia Ora Koleka
ReplyDeleteI really like how you added a lot of infomation about your brother. I also like how you added lots of describing words about him. It reminded me of when my sister was a little girl and she always helped me and made a mess everywhere. Maybe next time you could add a photo of your brother so that we know what he looks like. Anyway I loved your blog post. If you have any time please check out my blog at wpsbrittanyp.blogspot.com.
Blog you later!
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